I'm a Virgo, Scorpio Rising, Leo Moon. Frankly, I don't see myself as the 'typical' Virgo. Yes, I am at my very best when helping others. This has been brought to my attention a number of times. As for being a perfectionist, as we live in an imperfect world, I don't see the point in seeking perfection in anybody or anything. I do like language, listen very intently to what people are saying and remember conversations with enviable clarity. I am analytical, but keep most of what I observe to myself (Scorpio Rising, perhaps). My Leo Moon makes me somewhat dramatic in how I speak and, I think, it gives me my sense of humor and warmth.
I'm not overly critical and would never hurt a person's feelings with invective of any kind. I am rather generous with compliments, on the other hand, and would sooner say something pleasant than something harsh. I am very intuitive and can be somewhat fixed in my views (three planets in Leo and three in Scorpio). I don't like the mutable quality of Virgo and am very grateful for the fixed planets in my chart - I do think my Scorpio serves me especially well.
As for being neat, well, mine is one organized mess.